Pandemic (Story)

[Bree Fletcher]

Removed..........

[TheRealPeril]

I like the story Bree. I await the next installment!

[Reasoner]

You got the idea from the game didn't you Nice story, it's eminently detailed.

[Bree Fletcher]

You got the idea from the game didn't you Nice story, it's eminently detailed.

Ounoit. Because I'm the kind of person who sees a game like that and ends up thinking "But how do the people respond to all this?"

Also, you're probably going to laugh when you hear about where Penny's trying to get to.

[imnothere]

nice! your attention to detail brings your readers right into the story.

[BigNorr]

Like the story can't wait for more

[Bree Fletcher]

Well, that section's done. And no, it's not the end. As always, I'd like feedback. Pleases.

[Hgarrad]

Do you make these up yourself?

[imnothere]

"i'm taking it to hell with me" eh? very nicely done. good flow as always. and again your descriptions give one a view of the pointedly colorless world that is eating itself alive.

[Bree Fletcher]

"i'm taking it to hell with me" eh? very nicely done. good flow as always. and again your descriptions give one a view of the pointedly colorless world that is eating itself alive.

Well, in my mind at least, I was also hoping to show a kind of mindset like the Egyptian pharaohs... you know, where they wanted to take all their stuff to the afterlife, including servants? It really wasn't supposed to be vindictiveness so much as proprietorship.