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    This is interesting, I like it.
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    Not my way of life, but yours"

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGr8UNKy View Post
    This is interesting, I like it.
    If you like this style of storytelling, I'd recommend The House of Leaves.

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    Medical mystery with an Egyptian twist? I can't believe I didn't see this before today! *cries*

    Special Props To Don Ezio for this!

    In war, victory. In peace, vigilance. In death, sacrifice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fallbreeze View Post
    Medical mystery with an Egyptian twist? I can't believe I didn't see this before today! *cries*
    Haha, its fine, I am still updating it. :P
    Look for Heights in the RPG and story section


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    VERY Fine story. Keep it up!

    Made by me
    Enjoy Death. It only comes once...
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    I like your comical side.
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    Fingerprint ID Report

    Examiner: Arulia
    Date: 2/21/2011


    Finger Match: L. Fore
    Match %: 87%

    Closest Secondary: 24%

    Suspect Name: Arthur Kinski

    Other Information: Lifted from one of the bigger cloth scraps taken from Anna Liem's apartment. I have already let the police know about this but I think it is important you know as well Harry. This Arthur Kinski is our only real suspect in this case. I looked into his case history- he has a record for petty theft, but more interesting is the fact that four years ago he was admitted to Crystal Hospital and was released last year. We don't have permission to access those files- maybe you could talk to Dr. Thompson about getting a look at them.



    From: Anna Liem <graph-e-tee@cmail.com>
    To: Luna Liem <liemlunatic@cmail.com>
    <Received today>

    Hey Mom, I tried to call you, but you didn't answer.

    I wanted to know if you and Dad would like to come visit me for a day or two. With what happened to Dan and then someone breaking into my house, I just don't feel safe anymore. I talked to some of Dan's friends from NASCO and they are going to help me install some security cameras in my apartment.

    I also got a dog. His name is Sinbu. The guy who owns the building was fine with it, but if he gets any complaints he says he will talk to me. It's just a little mutt. I was assured that he shouldn't get much bigger than he is now.

    Mom, I'm really scared. I really need you guys to come stay with me. Call me. Please.

    Love, Anna



    Joseph Arron's Time Log
    21:02 - 8 hours working on this file...
    21:03 - Attempting to transfer physical computer memory
    21:22 - Transferred to a new computer
    21:24 - Incompatibility seems to have broken most of the security measures.
    21:26 - Located security camera files
    21:30 - Located secured business files
    21:32 - Porting files to zipdrive
    21:35 - New computer shutting down now...
    21:38 - The fan on this computer seems to have shut down...
    21:41 - The hard drive has melted down- any other information is probably lost.
    21:43 - **** burnt self on what was left of the hard drive
    Last edited by Lord Arumen; 10-27-2011 at 11:05 AM.
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    Awesome story, waiting for more
    Don't even THINK about it.

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    Hey whens the next post?

    Made by me
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    Quote Originally Posted by jannge View Post
    I like your comical side.
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    Granted.You get the midget cricket from Men In Black.Now go shoot Kemal Rondal.

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    Probably pretty soon here. gotta finish up the section
    Look for Heights in the RPG and story section


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    great story plot great way to make it sound realilistic

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