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    I sat and watched my neighbor
    My neighbor, The Poet
    By my little window, did I spy
    My neighbor known as That Guy
    That guy, sat by his little window
    Pen in mouth
    Mind in thought
    Lost looking out
    Maybe the frost
    I think he uttered
    Naw, he looked away
    Gazing at nothing
    Seeing inside
    His mind, I s'pose
    Things to paper
    With ink and quill
    Placing the words
    Just so
    Yes? No?
    I wonder to what write
    He will
    Or whom, about maybe right
    Silly me, always at play
    With my thoughts on display.

    On morrow's paper
    He did speed
    The poem to which
    I did read.

    I sat and watched my neighbor
    My neighbor, The Song Writer
    By my little window, my eyes unfurl
    My neighbor known as The Girl
    The girl, sat by her little window
    Pen in mouth
    Mind in thought
    Lost looking out
    Maybe the frost
    I think she uttered
    Naw, she looked away
    Gazing at nothing
    Seeing inside
    Her mind, I s'pose
    Measures to paper
    With ink and quill
    Placing the note
    Just so
    Yes? No?
    I wonder to what write
    She will
    Or whom, about perhaps, right?
    Silly me, always at play
    With my thoughts on display.
    Last edited by King Alboin; 06-16-2013 at 08:10 AM. Reason: I caint spell
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    nice poem ...and Last edited by King Alboin; Today at 07:10 AM. Reason: I (caint )spell hehe i kno i kno u did that on purpose
    when did pigs grow wings and fly???

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    thankyou seniour Fresh and I caint imagine what you are to speaking of, there. um =\
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    i kno i spell like chit
    when did pigs grow wings and fly???

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    Hover Cats, awaiting to pounce upon missplellings and awful bad grammer ...

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    Shadows seeping over
    highly detailed, well
    structured walls.

    The king upon his throne
    gorges on sweetmeats
    scouring his friends
    with bitter eye.

    The queen is in the courtyard
    with the grandest knight
    of all.

    The footsoldier is watching her;
    where is the cavalry?

    The royal hold great majesty
    at highest cost;
    alas.

    The king fearing assination
    but from where
    he can not know.

    Each member of the castle walls
    who stalks within the fortress halls
    awaits the mighty empire's
    next downfall...

    Awaiting war or outright murder;
    tense, alone, afraid,
    it is not long before the pressure
    nearly has a man unmade.

    His wife and queen stands by his side
    despite his crude cruelty
    and together they watch hawk like
    over their own personal rome
    when did pigs grow wings and fly???

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    An A+. excellent form, intense and visionary.

    Last edited by King Alboin; 06-22-2013 at 01:12 PM. Reason: I like commas
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    i didn't write it lol found it somewhere thought it was pretty cool so posted it here..i sux at writing poems
    when did pigs grow wings and fly???

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh420 View Post
    i didn't write it lol found it somewhere thought it was pretty cool so posted it here..i sux at writing poems
    shhhh you're not supposed to tell him that

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    *just riding along, listening to that poem...*

    Doo dee doo, dumpty diddy de de de de dumpty do .... *whistling and shtuff ...





    Then it's like ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh420 View Post
    i didn't write it lol found it somewhere thought it was pretty cool so posted it here..i sux at writing poems
    dooooo WHAAAAAA?!?!?... ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ...




    Quote Originally Posted by Soaap View Post
    shhhh you're not supposed to tell him that

    ^LoLs ,,I know huh right?
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