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    Quote Originally Posted by Chrissi View Post
    Your post asked what we thought. I told you what I thought.

    If you don't care, why did you ask?

    Or were you expecting only a unanimous "It's nice"?
    no.. its not right to tell someone that what they write is wrong in doing. if you were to write something.. i woudnt judge it or tell you to make changes of it.. the way i write my poems makes me different from everyone else, and if you dont like it dont tell me to fix it

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    Wink Quicky for Civony

    I came home to find one night
    My boyf had found a new game site
    He said to me that it is great
    You build yourself a city state
    You start from scratch, build and build
    From home to farms with field all tilled
    A Java game just like Civ
    To this game my time i will give
    And then I find to my great joy
    Great people playing my new toy
    Helping you out when its hard
    And a forum with a great bard
    My one day city is small
    But from my level one town hall
    I can see my kingdom grow
    On I soldier, keep on the go
    Wait for lumber, iron, stone
    It could be the greatest game known!

    A little homage to my new game

    Now off to bed, its gone 1am

    Night :P

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    Insomnia: A Haiku

    It is at nighttime,
    that I finally notice,
    my clock's blinking lights.

    It Matters
    "It does not matter if they are wrong,"
    "It does not matter if they are wrong,"
    Is what I have always been told.
    "It does not matter if they are wrong..."
    "...as long as you know that you are right."
    But what I think they meant to say is:
    "It does not matter if they are wrong..."
    "...unless they are US congressmen."

    Also, most of the poems on this topic are utter crap. A string of sentences does not a poem make, poems must have a meaning behind them.
    Not only that, but failing to capitalize "i" in a poem is a complete failure.
    Last edited by Darwin; 04-23-2009 at 03:40 PM.
    Don't mind me, I'm just a few slices short of a whole cake, and a few cards full of a short deck.

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    keep em comming!! lol

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    OR not, most of this is just wasted space

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    ok as far as i can see there isn't a poetry thread so i thought id create one, iv noticed a lot of people on here are very creative and very talented, i enjoy poetry a lot so id love to hear everyones stuff, dont be shy ill post mine first...

    this poem is called body in the snow

    dead eyes once spoke to me of happiness and misery of days that had past and gone of battles that had been lost and won of guilt toward our fellow man and sorrow for spilling blood across the land. those dead eyes shouted regret back at me shouted for a second chance shouted to be free. The stupid fool to late realized what it is he lost now his body lay cold lifeless and begins to frost. I had bent down and whispered warm breath against his cheek "life should not of been so bleak"
    i pulled the sword out from his chest and laid down his body for eternal rest
    i had brushed his long dark matted hair out from his face, beside him his shield and sword i had placed
    i had left him a coin and turned away walking barefoot in the snow i faded into the dawning day


    Two halves to a whole idiot

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    The Roaming Beast


    The roaming beast, seldom saw
    Running through, breaking law.
    Seeing death, in it's eye
    Only thing left, is to die.
    Roaming beast, never seen
    To be the best, somewhat lean.


    Elsworth speaks in red.

    The other Elsworth speaks in Blue, because indeed, he's number two.

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    very good work dude, short and sweet


    Two halves to a whole idiot

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    TY.


    Thin Thread


    A thin thread becomes out Lord,
    Throughout the lands, never cut by a sword.
    It rules through battles, running fast
    Depending on being the last.
    A thin thread, almost dead,
    Enough I think, has been said.


    Elsworth speaks in red.

    The other Elsworth speaks in Blue, because indeed, he's number two.

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    This is kind of like poetry.

    http://bbs.evony.com/showthread.php?t=10067

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