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Thread: The Life and lies of Sergent Grant

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    i am sorry i dont want help makes me feel less confident and suckish

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alzar View Post
    i am sorry i dont want help makes me feel less confident and suckish
    Sorry bud but your story sucked, you should try some RP, gain a little T1 experience and your stories would be more descriptive. My next bit of advice is lay off the drugs, I guarantee you'll stop having Vietnam flashbacks (a war you weren't in) and your stories will actually be interesting.

    I'm just picking on you though your story does blow.

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    Im pretty sure you should feel that way WITHOUT help

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    I'm pretty sure that if all you're going to do is put him down for trying to share a story, You should not have posted and let the thread be.

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    This is his second story. In his previous, i did a remake and offered it to him. You can even go look. But no matter how many times we told him he wasnt a good writer, he refused to listen.

    And how long are you going to let this go on? We are offering HELP. he doesnt listen. He needs to realize he isnt good and if he wants to be a writer (which he clearly does) then he has to accept help!!

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    ...Then if you offer him help, And he doesn't accept, Then just leave him alone...

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    But he needs the help.

    And by him publishing another story clearly shows he doesnt get it. If he keeps this up it will get to the point in which the stories are just spam.

    I want to help him cause i feel sorry for him. He clearly believes he is a good writer, and i dont like people in denial. These people are bashing him and flaming him, but he still doesn't get it.

    That's why I want to help... not only to stop the flaming but so he can believe he's a good writer, and have it be true.

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    ...So calling his stories "Suckish" (Well he said that, But you agreed) is helping him?

    If he does not take advice and makes bad stories, Then just ignore those stories and they will go away...Nobody had a problem ignoring my story...

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    Yeah. Just let it die!

    But, if we let him post all those horrible stories, the forum will be clogged. Thats exactly what happened to Deathmarr. He didn't listen, so we gave him advice and help. And, at the end, he became a pretty good writer.

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    Lol, much better

    Or at least I think so

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