Conversation Between Montros and Darkys

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  1. Take care bro, good luck out there in the real world

    *gazes off into the distance*
  2. new chapter or Shaco de Blanc is up
  3. Thanks. That's the kind of advice I was looking for I'll add a few new things tonight after I've had more time to think about it. I appreciate the help
  4. Not bad, although I think you shouldn't make all of your ships offensive. Of course, if it's gonna be that kind of Rp, it's fine by me.

    Also, similar to the opinion I just said, I think you're focusing a bit too much on weapons and offensive things. What about shields? What kind are they? Defensive mechanisms? What kinds of key areas are there in the ship?

    Maybe you'd want to like to clarify more on the info and history of the attacks? What exactly happened that caused the nearby planets to become uninhabitable? What were the notable mistakes that humankind made during the battles?

    These are probably the main things you should work on to better your RP.

    Keep the good work up, bruh. Love the structure of it!
  5. sorry i almost forgot, ill do it after this game of halo reach
  6. When are you posting your app in The Cage?
  7. yo, just started up a new story, this one is much more imaginative and original.... i think. XP. Check it out, its called Ner' Shando
  8. Seeing that it's your first here on Evony, Sure. I'll go for it.
  9. Join Fallout RP?
  10. alright no problem, thanks for accepting me
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