It says in my user CP that you sent me a PM...but I can't has the finding of it...
K so did you read it yet?
K so go read my story and get a spellcheck
It does. Make it better, I mean.
You don't know what onomatopoeia is... It's the use of words that represent sounds. And it makes a good story hook. You used it well, and also unknowingly apparently.
Nice use of onomatopoeia for the hook. Reading 4th paragraph now...how would they know what a werewolf's eyes look like? Reading 5th paragraph now...I'm guessing you've read the Zombie Survival Guide from the weapon choices Reading second post now...wait nevermind it's just an edit... Noticing that the one too many S's in your signature is capitalized.... Reading second actual story post now...seems a bit choppy for some reason, but the writing is good overall K, now if you haven't already go read my story http://bbs.evony.com/showthread.php?t=127770
Too lazy. Send teh links.
It's damn annoying is what it is.
Crap. Now it means it won't go away from my notifications thing until someone approves it.
HA! Your message is moderated.
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