Quote Originally Posted by Borune View Post
Okay, i made a site for my alliance and I think it could be a bit better...
They're to amazed that we have a website to criticize, and what they do criticize is much too nice in my opinion, so if you would, id appreciate someone putting the beatdown on my site
the link is in my siggy

It's nice, but too business like. You have made it too much of a presentation like you are a company. Also, You need more topics in your forums. Such as allies section, war, a general chat section, an officers section, and so forth to keep it organized and easy for your members to find important info, or just mess around.

The important stuff you want to make so only members can see, make the rest public, like a section about your alliance, who the leaders are, who your allies are, and whatever section you guys goof around in so visitors can get an idea of what your alliance is like.