you could put your own opinion in the paper, and say why you feel that way, and anything you could understand from the other side as well, so you dont seem like you're being biased. it didnt seem to me like you were rambling about different things, but then again i'm probably not the best judge of that. i am the master of rambling on about random things.
for example if you believed that euthanasia should be allowed, say why you think it should be allowed, and then say what you understand about the other side.
something like "i believe euthanasia should be legal because people shouldn't have to be in pain, if they have an untreatable illness, but i can some people wouldnt like it. it would be terrible to lose a loved one because they chose to end their life." something like that but probably more detailed, or you may not even believe in euthanasia, and would put something entirely different.
also if i might make a suggestion, could you put the part that's your paper into a quote box or something.
i dont know about everyone else but it was kinda hard for me to tell where your paper began and ended and what was the post.



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