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    Most browser's have a built in spell checker, I found Google Chrome's to be a little stupid at times.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KOOPS95 View Post
    Candle: Innefective Grammatist.
    lol point taken. i'll learn instead of teach.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerevar2 View Post
    Most browser's have a built in spell checker, I found Google Chrome's to be a little stupid at times.
    Yeah the most ironic is when it says Google is misspelled.

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    Pialpha has a long history of pushing others into fights and then sitting back to laugh at the fireworks.
    Quote Originally Posted by Foxybunny -- Referring to Myself
    ...that a certain person who loves to instigate without ever getting his own personal hands dirty (and who thinks I don't know he does that)

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    with a thread like this we can trust humans to help.

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    Humanity despises grammar, silly. There's no way you'll get an actual person to help you out.

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    We need to get Darkbrady to post in here.

    Quote Originally Posted by Wildor View Post
    Pialpha has a long history of pushing others into fights and then sitting back to laugh at the fireworks.
    Quote Originally Posted by Foxybunny -- Referring to Myself
    ...that a certain person who loves to instigate without ever getting his own personal hands dirty (and who thinks I don't know he does that)

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    i love Darkbradys posts!!!

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    Waiting forever(super super long short story Adam you know who this is about)
    ♥ Waiting Forever♥

    “Megan just do it! ” Molly says popping her head out of her bedroom door. “Molly I can’t.” “Megan! Oh my God do it! This is the whole purpose of you coming over stupid! ” “But I’m scared.” “Why you like him don’t you? He called you didn’t he? This is like a dream come true you told me yourself you couldn’t believe after all the thinking that every phone call was from him that it finally was.” Megan sighs. “Alright” she says in an I-hope-your-right voice. Megan dials the number and waits while the phone rings an older woman picks up the phone assuming that it is his Grandma Megan asks “Hi is Josh there? ” “Who? ” “Josh.” “Hun you must have the wrong number.” “Oh…I’m sorry” Megan hangs up the phone and looks at Molly who came out of her room in anticipation. “It was a wrong number.” Megan says blankly. “No way! Are you serious give me the number you probably hit the wrong buttons.” Molly dials the number “Hi is Josh there? ” “Listen I told the other girl the same thing you’ve got the wrong number! ” Molly hangs up the phone, and says “Oops. I’m sure he just said it wrong I mean come on I forget my own phone number some times too.” Molly gives an encouraging smile and says “Wana call Kevin? Maybe he’s going to the prep game then you can finally meet him! ” Megan smiles a huge smile Kevin was Molly’s much talked about but never met boyfriend. “Yeah that sounds fun.” Megan laughs. Molly calls Kevin. “Hey Kevin are you going to the Prep game…you are? Awesome wana meet us somewhere… Yeah Megan’s over. Now you guys can finally meet! ” Megan laughs as she sees that girlish smile cross Molly’s lips. “Ok well I’ll see ya there bye.” Molly hangs up the phone. “Ok now let’s go get ready.”
    Molly’s mom calls up the stairs. “Molly you are going to be late if you don’t get down here right now.” Molly rolls her eyes. “Yes mother.” Molly strolls down the hall to where Megan is putting on the rest of her eyeliner. “Hey you ready? ” “Yep” “Ok let’s go before my mom has a cow.”
    Molly and Megan are stroll around the football game looking for Kevin. Megan sees a boy with his skateboard looking in their direction. The boy had long blackish brown hair that hung in his eyes. The boy was about Megan’s height maybe around 5’8. Megan thinks to herself “Oh that has to be him.” Molly then notices him and runs over to him, he picks her up and spins her around. “Aww how cute” says Megan once again to herself and smiles wi****lly. “Kevin this is Megan, Megan this is Kevin.” The three of them walk around for the remainder of the game chatting happily about nothing in particular. For the most part Megan had an awesome time but she couldn’t stop thinking about Josh. Megan then sees her friend Anna. Anna was a short pretty girl with beautiful curly brown Italian hair. She loved to cook and everything she did cook was absolutely out of this world. Anna was a clown one of the funniest bunch of the group. “Hey what’s up Anna? ” “Hey Megan, not a lot. What are you doing here? ” “Oh I went to Molly’s and we decided to come to the game so I could Meet Kevin.” “Oh Kevin? Where is he? ” “He’s up there. Hey Kevin turn around! ” Kevin turns around “This is Anna our friend.” “Oh ok hi! ” Megan laughs softly and then says to Anna “Those two are so cute together.” Anna and Megan continue to walk in follow of Molly and Kevin.
    Later on when the four of them decided to sit for a while Megan tells Anna about her attempt to call Josh. “Are you sure Megan? ” “Yeah I’m sure, Molly tried too the only thing I got out of the phone call was feeling really bad for that poor old woman.” “Megan I don’t think he did it on purpose.” When Megan doesn’t say anything Anna tries again. “Look you know that every time he calls me it’s always about you.” Anna nudges Megan playfully “Hey cheer up he called you remember? ” Megan smiles shyly. “Does he really ask about me all the time? ” Anna rolls her eyes. “Yeah, non stop. So should I assume that those feels that you had last year still remain? ” Megan whistles an, I’m innocent tune. “So I guess I should tell him to call you then? ” Megan blushes slightly and grins uncontrollably. “Yes please.” Prep wins the game and Anna leaves and Molly Megan and Kevin walk to where Molly’s parents were picking them up. The three of them stand there waiting for a while talking cheerfully. “Well see ya Kevin” Megan says as Molly’s mom pulls up to his house and Molly gets out to say goodbye. Molly gets back into the car and plops down on the seat next to Megan.
    When they get to Molly’s house Molly’s mom goes to bed. Megan and Molly stay up late talking about anything and everything. Megan loved this part of coming over to Molly’s house it was the part where the two of them stayed up having great late night heart to hearts. Molly is a retro painter/poet/writer all crammed into one tiny freckle face package. She could play one mean violin even though she stopped after six years back when she was younger. She still plays better than anyone Megan knew. Which in other words meant better than Megan. She had that fair colored skin dude to the Irish in her. Molly is full of a charisma so full of a life and spirit that it was almost impossible to describe it. She was full of energy and didn’t care what anyone thought about her. Molly was the type of person who would give someone a hug just because she wanted one back.
    “Oh my god I just thought of something. What if he wants to go back out with me? What do I do? ” Megan says with a stricken look on her face. “Ummmm you say yes.” Molly replies in a “dur” voice. “But…but” “But what? Megan every since you broke up with the guy last year that’s all you dreamed about. I thought that’s what you wanted; another chance? ” “But Molly it was messed up last time what if it is this time? I just…” Megan sighs, “I don’t know let’s sleep on it.” Molly yawns a huge yawn “Sounds like a plan see ya in the morning, ‘night” “ G’night Molly.”
    The girls wake up early and decide to go on a walk and end up at the park. Then ventured home after getting sick from riding the swings too much. “Megan your mother’s here.” Molly’s mom calls up the stairs “Ok thank you Mrs. Kuhnley! ” Megan walks from the bathroom into Molly’s room. “Hey seen my bag? ” Molly jumps off the bed and grabs Megan’s bag from the end of her bed. “Here ya go. Thanks for commin.” “Thanks for having me. I had fun.” Together they walk out of the bedroom and down the hall. “So are you gana talk to him next time he calls? ” Molly asks as they walk down the hall together. “Yeah, I won’t do any harm just talking to him will it? And besides we need to talk there are things left unsaid that needn’t be that way.” The girls come down the stairs and hug each other goodbye.
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    Quote Originally Posted by rikorikojie View Post
    I don't know how to start since I can confuse people a lot, so I made this thread for all who need to know how to will not confuse people so much.
    This made my brain hurt.
    Then you post a wall of text?
    Are you trying to kill us all!!!???
    PEACE

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    megean sat on the bed staring at the phone."he's not going to call me. I know it he won’t” The phone rings Megan looks at it. “Oh **** what if that’s him? ” She picks up the phone heart pounding rapidly in her chest.
    “Hello? ” she asks into the receiver slightly trembling. “Hi is Megan there? ” Oh my God it’s him! “Oh hey Josh” Megan says in a, would be calm voice.
    “Megan? Hi! ” Josh’s voice sounded the same as she remembered it.
    “Hey Josh what’s up? ”
    ”Oh nothing how about you? ” he replies cheerfully
    “Same old same. So what’ve you been up too.”
    ”Not a lot how come you didn’t call me on Friday? Did I give you the wrong number? ”
    “Ah I did try to call yeah ya did give me the wrong number.” Megan voice takes on a slight edge Josh notices.
    ”Oh no I knew it I would mess it up, I can never remember if it’s a 6 or a 4. I’m sorry Megan I really didn’t mean it.” There is a slight pause. “So how’ve you been? How’s school? ”
    “Me well I’m ok I guess and school is just well…school same as always filled with the same jerky people as always.”
    ”Yeah that’s one thing I don’t miss about that school, all the people in it. Hey I heard a bunch of teachers left. Who’s not there anymore? ”
    “Umm let’s see…Umm Pryce.”

    ”Oh my god Pryce isn’t there anymore! Wow.”

    ”Yeah I know. Let’s see who else? Umm…wow I really can’t think of anyone else a lot
    of them left though.”

    ”Oh hey is Oligeri still there? ”

    ”Yeah so is Ms.C and Walker and Perseo and Mr. Webber. Oh Swartsfager left and so did Amli and Roberta. Vitron is gone too.”

    ”Wow you’re right there isn’t anyone left there.”

    Megan laughs a little, “Yeah I know. So what school are you going to now I heard that you were going to Girard then that you were at Vincent.”

    ”Yeah I’m at Vincent now. I was living with my mom but I’m living with my Grandma now.”
    ”Oh”

    ”I called your house the other day ya know I left a message.”

    ”Oh” Megan smiled to herself as she used the same word he used to use whenever the two of them talked last year online after Megan broke up with him and he had a girlfriend who happened to be Anna. Which is when Megan figured out that she really wanted him back. But Anna and Josh didn’t last very long, only about three weeks. Then he went on and asked out a bunch of other people that Megan knew but weren’t exactly friends with. Then he finally went out with a girl named Jamey. They lasted for a long time and she never really knew if they broke up or not. But last year she wished that they would. She wanted to tell him every day she saw him and she did in her own way she stopped hating him so much and glaring at him every time she saw him in the hallway. They began talking again. She never did tell him though she couldn’t do it the only thing stopping her was Jamey. Megan smiled again as she remembers how she longed to run her fingers through his hair and how she wanted to look into his dark chocolate eyes. She still wanted all those things now more than ever she missed him a lot. She never would forget the day he got expelled.
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